How do you revise the squirrel who ran in circles around the circumference of the tree chattered angrily at the curious cat?

The best way to revise this sentence would be by placing the line "who ran in circles around the circumference of the tree" between commas.

This line is acting as an adjectival subordinate clause. It is modifying the sentence's subject -The squirrel- and is introduced by a relative pronoun that is working as a subject.

Therefore the correct way to write this sentence would be:

The squirrel, who ran in circles around the circumference of the tree, chattered angrily at the curious cat.

the first step is to convey the appropriate emotions.

pre-writing

why we feel good, or better, when we laugh?

is there a scientific explanation for this to happen?

which are the sources?

rough draft

laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings.

newport academy: endorphins reduce stress and strength social connections.

they combat anxiety and depression.

final draft

we know that when we laugh we feel better; when something is making us laugh it means we thought it was funny at some point, even if it was not meant that way. what we know is that it made us feel good. that is something we all can realize easily, but is it a chemical explanation for it to happen? of course there

according to joe bluett, laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings. also, he says that laughter can increase confidence, self-esteem, creativity, positivity and resilience, bringing positive changes to all aspects of our lives.

the newport academy says that, when we laugh, we release endorphins and that makes our body feel instantly relieved from tension and worry. endorphins also reduce stress and strength social connections.

therefor, laughter is the best to combat anxiety and depression.