In "Name that Player", Do you publish the story as is? Why or why not?

I would not publish because the story seems incomplete.

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When reading "Name that Player", we can see some flaws in the continuity and problems in establishing a coherent and cohesive text. This allows for a failure in the reader's understanding and a feeling that the text is incomplete and needs continuity. For this reason, I believe that the story should not be published as it is, but that it should be edited and continued, eliminating incomplete points.

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alliances in ww1 were different from ww2 because the entente in ww1 made up of serbia,russia,france,britan,japan and italy later america  and all allied in a sort of balance of power and too keep germany,austria-hungary,and the ottomans down. russia allied the serbians in order to exert its influence in the balkans while france allied the russians because france was still in dismay and insulted after the defeat to the germans during the unification of germany and britian allied the belgians after the germans invasion of belgium.in ww2 the alliances were in a preemptive attempt to deter any further wars into happening while germany and italy allied since they were insulted and humiliated after the previous war while also sharing a similar ideology of facsim along with japan which all 3 had a want for world domination and agreed to assist one another in the endevours 

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