Read the introductory paragraph of an essay about the greek philosopher socrates. socrates was a great philosopher who taught several key ideas to his community. first, human wisdom begins with recognizing one’s own ignorance. second, the unexamined life is not worth living. third, the most important thing is ethical virtue. fourth, a good human being cannot be harmed. what score should this paragraph receive? score 2 because it provides a main point and at least one idea to support the main point. score 4 because it provides a main point, several ideas to support the main point, and explains each of the ideas. score 1 because it provides no main point or does not support the main point with any ideas. score 3 because it provides a main point and several ideas to support the main point.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

a rough draft essay is the final form of an essay after it has been edited and polished.