Which sentence would best create a strong, descriptive image in the reader’s mind if it were added after sentence 4? he was casting quick, sideways glances in the direction the bus should be coming from, and his left foot beat a steady rhythm on the hot pavement. all of the man’s actions and mannerisms clearly indicated his distress, and i could not staring at him while we waited for the bus to finally arrive. the man’s behaviors led me to guess that he was anxious about something, and i wondered if the tardy bus could have caused such upset in someone. in fact, he appeared to be so aggravated that i thought for a second that he would explode with anger, but then he just sat down and silently waited.

The answer is C.  "the man's behavour led me to guess...upset in someone."

 Sentences A and B describe the actions and manners, showing the man's behaviour and anxiety: casting quick glances, his foot beating on the hot pavement etc. appearing he could even explode with anger.  At some point (C), he changed and just got calm, wainting silently, leading the speaker to wonder if the cause of all this could be the bus' delay.

answer: b. the moon is much smaller than the earth.

explanation:

it starts off by comparing the earth and venus. it also only says one sentance about the moon which make it the odd one out. in conclusion the answer is b.

pre-writing

why we feel good, or better, when we laugh?

is there a scientific explanation for this to happen?

which are the sources?

rough draft

laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings.

newport academy: endorphins reduce stress and strength social connections.

they combat anxiety and depression.

final draft

we know that when we laugh we feel better; when something is making us laugh it means we thought it was funny at some point, even if it was not meant that way. what we know is that it made us feel good. that is something we all can realize easily, but is it a chemical explanation for it to happen? of course there

according to joe bluett, laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings. also, he says that laughter can increase confidence, self-esteem, creativity, positivity and resilience, bringing positive changes to all aspects of our lives.

the newport academy says that, when we laugh, we release endorphins and that makes our body feel instantly relieved from tension and worry. endorphins also reduce stress and strength social connections.

therefor, laughter is the best to combat anxiety and depression.