Read this example. wendy was assigned to write a literary analysis of the article "old enough,” by dolores salamon. in the article, the author argues that the voting age should be lowered from eighteen to sixteen. wendy believed the author’s argument that sixteen-year-olds are just as mature and responsible as eighteen-year-olds was logical and convincing. wendy believed the author’s examples of sixteen-year-olds having the responsibility of being students, having jobs, and in some states holding drivers’ licenses were valid points. wendy’s thesis statement for her literary analysis is "salamon effectively details that sixteen-year-olds have just as many responsibilities as older teens, who are often working students.” which choice best describes wendy’s thesis statement? a. wendy’s thesis needs revision because it contains details about the topic. b. wendy’s thesis is acceptable because it contains quotations about the topic. c. wendy’s thesis needs revision because it expresses a position that cannot be proven with text evidence. d. wendy’s thesis is acceptable because it expresses a viewpoint and has text evidence.

femininity is conveyed through bernice's personality. she doesn't act how the other girls act and everyone thinks she is weird. she learns how to act in a way that was considered femininely appropriate at the time. she becomes so popular but her attempts to be liked end up backfiring when she is pressured into bobbing her hair. the author wrote that bernice cut off her cousin's hair in revenge for tricking her to cut her hair. this was the authors way of trying to change the way feminine is defined and the way women are expected to act.

invention of the washing machine

in the past, people used sticks and stones or scrub boards to clean their clothing. as it was sweaty, backbreaking work, we owe a world of to james king because he created the model for the modern washing machine in 1851. the most important issue was that this machine cleaned clothes while a person cranked the handle. doing this made people who used it develop strong muscles in their arms. later, in 1908, alva j. fisher created an electric washing machine named thor. this one was not the first automatic washing machine. however, it was one of the most popular models at the time.