I nee to write a 5-paragraph eassy, so please help me it is base on an article name "Schools in Maryland Allow Elementary Students to Carry Cellphones, by Amanda Lenhart, The Washington Post" here are some pic. I just need help writing two paragraph. I already have my Introduction, Body Paragraph #1 and my Body paragraph #2 just need my Body paragraph #3 and my Conclusion I will give brainlis and 30 pnt. Prompt:
Write an argumentative essay answering the questions: Should students be allowed to carry cellphones on campus? You must support your claim with evidence from the text. You may also use relevant examples from your own experience, observations, and other readings.

Directions:
Before you begin, read the text below, which presents information about the advantages and disadvantages of carrying a cell phone at school. Use the Student Writing Checklist on the back of this page to plan and write a multi-paragraph essay that addresses the prompt. Use your own words, except when quoting directly from the text.

PLEASE DONT WAST THEM

answer:

a. "there, said he, there is something for you."

explanation:

"said he" should not have been part of what is in the dialogue.

you can change by someone having a negative opinon of you in many ways for example thi can lead to depression and taking of ones life also known as sucide this effects there self esteem and ego in a negative way making them feel sad depressed and stressed causing them to act gloomy and sad if this continuses this can lead to self harm or much worse things.

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b. both have yearned to escape the environment they experienced as a child.

what: when quoting a source, use the author’s words verbatim, or word-for-word. this means you shouldn’t change any grammar, punctuation, spelling, etc. put quotations around the words to tell your reader where the quote begins and where it ends.

you also need to acknowledge the author. for example, if using mla format for your research paper, you should have in-text citations with the author’s name and page number listed at the end of each quote.

when: use quotations to provide concrete examples to support your claims. using direct quotations is a great way to build your credibility on the subject. it’s also a good idea to quote your source when the author states things in a powerful way. if you think he or she said it best, then use the exact words to share the ideas.

example: in the short story “a jury of her peers”, mrs. hale compares mrs. wright to her caged bird, saying “she—come to think of it, she was kind of like a bird herself. real sweet and pretty, but kind of timid and—fluttery. how—she—did—change” (glaspell).

paraphrasing

what: paraphrasing differs from quoting because you restate the passage in your own words. since you don’t use the author’s words, you don’t need to use quotation marks. however, you still need to acknowledge the author for his or her ideas.

when paraphrasing a text, you should communicate the full meaning of the text; don’t change the meaning. it can be a condensed version of the text, or it could end up being longer than the source it’s paraphrasing.

when: you use paraphrasing when you take notes, or explain a chart or diagram to someone. paraphrasing highlight the important parts of a larger text. it also allows you to simplify the ideas for your readers.

example:

original: “it was no ordinary thing that called her away–it was probably further from ordinary than anything that had ever happened in dickson county. but what her eye took in was that her kitchen was in no shape for leaving: her bread all ready for mixing, half the flour sifted and half unsifted” (glaspell).

paraphrase: as mrs. hales walks around mrs. wright’s home, she notices that the kitchen is in disarray as if she was in the middle of baking bread (glaspell).