Do you think that this is good for what the teacher asked for please read it and tell me what would you change or not to will give brainliest ​

From what book is this? I think I know but I am not sure.

I think you give a strong point. Toward the end though you seem to repeat what you said in the beginning. You should probably try to backup your statement as well. Make sure to have a strong claim and reasoning and maybe add some Evidence. I like how you used the dynamic characters and tool them into comparison as well. Hope this helps :)

1- cleans/ tidies up

2- were

3-would be

4- had known

5-takes

6-must be/ have to be/should be

a simile is first defined as a type of speech that uses one thing or phrase with comparisons to things of an unrelated kind, often in order to make a more vivacious description. so of the phrases above, only the last one (i swear she cast a shadow white as stone) would be considered a simile, as a shadow white as stone takes two unrelated things and uses them in an interesting way.

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