Can you look over my paper if you find mistakes or think is would change something pls let me know

yes i can look at ur paper

Explanation:

ok im pretty sure the second pic u put is the first pg so im just gonna go with that

intro:

- i think u should elaborate more on the first quote u put, and then introduce the book or u dont have to

yes its a very cool quote---

--- since there is so much prejudice in the book, how does it show that prejudice is a "dirty" word?

- u use 'prejudice' like 2345x in the intro paragraph and the same thing is repeated many times in three diff. sentences  

so the point of the essay is to look at different examples of prejudice right...

if it is:

- maybe come up with clearer ts for each body paragraph stating what "type" of prejudice is being displayed and also how it is displayed, i see that u are comparing to each characters, but in the end, how do all the characters relate to each other and exemplify the theme of ur essay?

its good just wc and also dont repeat stuff and flow

that was fun

imma sleep now

the best practice

1. keep your workspace clean

2. wash your hands

3. seperate and clean chemicals and equipment

4.   use microfiber cleaning utensils

5. clean and sanitize all work surfaces

hope this !

a rough draft essay is the final form of an essay after it has been edited and polished.