HURRY PLEASE! Read the body paragraph from an argumentative essay on Louisiana’s economy. 1) Some may say that the state’s economy is not growing as fast as it should. 2) However, people who believe that are dum. 3) There has been an increase in jobs in the private sector in recent years. 4) Also, the income level for Louisiana’s workers has improved across the state.

What would be the best way to revise sentence 2?

Change it to a more respectful tone.
Add a transition to connect the ideas.
Fix the spelling and punctuation errors.
Add vivid imagery or descriptive details.

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Explanation:

Some people may say that our state’s economy is not growing as fast is it should be, however i believe otherwise. I believe differently because over the recent years, there has been an increase in jobs, and in the private sector. Going along with that, the income level for Louisiana’s workers has improved greatly across the state.

to kill a mockingbird basically is about a lawyer who goes against everything in a racist society like at the time of this novel, to defend a black man accused of sexual abuse. in the bible there are cases like that of joseph, who was accused by the woman of potifar, for a crime similar to that of tim robbinson, of that novel (genesis 39: 1-20). at this point we see that god also provides the escape to joseph, who was accused unjustly, but in his time, and through his attitude, his faith was not shaken, and god provided the solution. the perspective of god also written in the bible and not pay evil with evil. (ephesians 4: 32, 1 thessalonians 5: 15, 1 peter 3: 9). atticus, the lawyer, demonstrated during this lee novel, empathy, love of neighbor, understood the situation of this accused man. he went against everything in that society, and stood in favor of that man, for the injustice committed. this shows the empathy, the love taught by christ, in some passages that speak of love and justice in the sermon of the beatitudes (especially verses 6 and 7 of matthew 5).