Plz answer my question in proper manner

Last night you heard a noise in your room. You opened your eyes and saw nothing suspicious or that could be making the noise. "It's out of the room," you thought, and immediately got up from your bed, determined to find the source of the noise.

You tried to turn on the lights in the living room of the house, but you couldn't find the switch. "How strange. I was sure the switch would be on that wall" you said to yourself. It was then that he realized that you were not at home and tried to run away from where you were. However, your feet did not move and the noise gradually increased in volume.

Without understanding what was happening, you tried to clarify your ideas, but the noise was deafening, you felt that you were about to lose consciousness, while feeling your body heating up, you had the feeling that the walls ... TRIM TRIM TRIM! the alarm went off, freeing you from a terrifying nightmare.

yes tht is good is it a promisis