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You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article and write a reflection paragraph in which you explain the revisions you made.
1. Choose one body paragraph from your informational article to revise.
2. Copy this paragraph
3. Review your paragraph for coherence. Make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
4. Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
5. Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors. 6. Write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made. describing the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing.
submit 1. the original paragraph 2. the revised paragraph 3. the reflection on the changes you have made Save your work to your computer or drive. Submit your work
here my paragraph:
people needed a away to get rid of these vultures. they were many ways to get rid of them. so they asked the officials to do something. the officials decided to use pyrotechnics, a type of firework, to scare the vultures out the neighborhood. they shot them on the air so it would make loud noise and light which made the vultures go away and stay away. once the vultures leave, the wildlife Services suggest putting up deterrents so they will not land on houses.
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