I'd appreciate some help! Please tell me what you think of a rhyme I just thought up! (It's kind of like a song)

Tick tick tick, I'm alone all I got is this.
Tock tock tock goes the clock up on my wall.
Fix fix fix, nows there nothing else to be fixed.
What have I missed, I'm broken again and that's all.

Love love love, no-one wants someone like this.
Heart heart heart, no the hate won't make me fall.
Move move move, as I walk and talk again.
Make make make, me feel like I've done something wrong.

The following question refers to “the philosophy of composition” by edgar allan poe and on writing by stephen king. what is a key difference in the use of details in the texts? poe’s essay is dominated by facts, while king’s memoir is dominated by images and examples. poe references numerous authors and literary works, while king does not reference any other authors or literary works. poe includes a list of all the poems he has written, while king includes a list of all the books he has written. poe’s essay is full of personal details about his wife and children, while king’s memoir is filled with details about his pets.