31 POINTS [1] Toy poodles get a bad rap. [2] Although a little feisty, they are also exceptionally intelligent. [3] They are said to be one of the most trainable breeds around. [4] And here's something potential dog owners may not know: for their size, toy poodles are excellent guard dogs. [5] One toy poodle actually scared an intruder with it's angry barking. What is the BEST way to improve the sentence fluency in the paragraph? A. Make the tone consistent. B. Combine sentences 3 and 4. C. Vary the beginnings of the sentences. D. Add transition words to some sentences.

I think the answer is A.

Explanation:

By making the tone consistent, it seems like the writer is jumping around less. Using some transition words would really help this paragraph flow, in my opinion. At the moment, the words kind of jump around from place to place, and might confuse the reader.

Hope I was correct!!

~Kweenie~

in ray bradbury's short story "a sound of thunder", mr. eckels's fearfulness leads to drastic consequences for the rest of the world.

in the story, mr. eckels, who is a hunter, hires a time travel company to travel to the age of dinosaurs. although he is excited for the hunting expedition at the beginning, when they reach there and mr. eckels sees the tyrannosaurus, he feels frightened. as he is afraid of the tyrannosaurus, he steps off the path although he has been warned not to do it. by stepping off the path, the entire course of the future is affected: mr. eckart alters the future by stepping on a butterfly, which causes a new man to be elected president in the future. in that way, it is mr. eckart's fearfulness what triggers 'the butterfly effect' and what leads to drastic consequences for the rest of the world.