While reading the first draft of your argumentative essay, you decide that it would not convince readers of your claim. which identifies the most appropriate change to your draft?
a. open your essay with a humorous anecdote.
b. add supporting evidence to the body of your essay.
c. add examples and transitions to your introduction.
d. move supporting details from your conclusion to your introduction.

Which sentence from the story best illustrates how jeannette feels about her family’s choice of vacation?

Which example is presented in chronological

Subject: save the whales! dear professor crest, i know you are really busy and everything, but i was hoping that you could spend more time thinking about how to save the whales. it’s up to us to speak up on their behalf. it’s really wrong that some amusement parks use these poor, defenseless animals for recreational purposes. this must be stopped, and you’re the person to do it! ttyl, jules which revisions would make this e-mail more formal? check all that apply. a. removing the contractions b. removing the exclamation points c. removing the salutation d. removing the slang and casual speech e. removing the information about amusement parks