Analyze and compare the English and Korean written script in 3 to 4 lines. please I need help!

When providing contact information on a resume, be sure to include your name, address, phone number, and special awards your name, email address, special awards and fax number your name, address, email address, and phone number your name, phone number, fax number, and times that are best to call

Ki lang sa ye? tanpri eksplike kisa ki pale lang sa a ak peyi yo.

Is this inappropriate language,”good evening,everyone. for coming out to sit on hard,uncomfortable stadium concrete on an unseasonably warm evening and wearing clothes and shoes you can’t wait to get home to get get ou of.” if so,how can i write it in formal?