Read the following sentence: The mall was almost empty.
Which revision makes the general description the most vivid?
A. Not very many people went to the mall, so it seemed as though it
was pretty empty.
B. Two or three shoppers wanderedlistlessly through the vast, nearly
abandoned mall.
C. It was really interesting to see that the mall had so few people in it
at that time.
D. When the mall was empty, it seemed as if most people had
stopped shopping there.