Can someone pls help Read Pablo’s draft of the opening paragraph of his latest short story:

Edgar can't wait to play in the championship soccer tournament. He and his team have fought hard to make it to this point and have been rewarded with their first chance to be the top team.

His teacher tells him he needs to add a bit more context. What does this mean Pablo needs to do?

A.
Add another character
B.
Write a conclusion to the story
C.
Include details about the setting
D.
Make sure he has the who, what, where, when, and why

Scribe: writes a. audience: heare b. audiophile: stereo c. incisive: speech d. aquarium: fish caesars analogy

Padma has written a paper on the effects of the black death, a plague that struck europe in 1347 and killed millions of people. she focused on three major results of the plague: • a smaller population after the plague led to higher wages and greater independence for workers. • the power of the catholic church weakened because so many members had died and others had lost their faith. • a lack of farm workers led more people to raise livestock rather than planting crops, changing the european diet. read her conclusion: it does not seem right to say that an experience as horrifying as the black death had any “good” sides. still, the changes that followed the plague improved the lives of peasants. people who had previously lived in poverty, forced to work for a single employer, now had higher wages and the freedom to change jobs. even so, the continent had been devastated and would take many years to recover. which statement best evaluates her conclusion? a. the conclusion effectively summarizes all the writer’s main points. b. the conclusion is engaging, but it introduces an unnecessary new idea. c. the conclusion is engaging, but only summarizes one of the writer’s points. d. the conclusion is engaging but it does not summarize any of the writer’s main points.

Is this inappropriate language,”maybe i would have actually done my homework”?