Need help with my Assignment. ( I'm writing about the character " Jack" In the story ( " Lord of the Flies"). I have written 3 full paragraphs and need at least 3 more paragraphs. If mine needs to be fixed to make it sound better can someone help me fix it. I posted a picture of what I wrote so far. I have written down what I wrote inside the Parentheses incase you can't read the picture. ( Jack represents evil and violence, the dark side of human nature. A former choirmaster and a " head boy" at his school, he arrived on the island having experienced some success in exerting control over others by dominating the choir with his militaristic attitude. He is eager to make rules and punish those who break them, although he consistently breaks them himself when he needs to further his own interests. His main interest is hunting, an endeavor that begins with the desire for meat and builds to the overwhelming urge to mater and kill other living creatures. Hunting develops the savagery that already ran close to his surface, making him "ape-like" as he prowls through the jungle. His domain is the emotions, which rule and fuel his animal nature. The dictator in Jack becomes dominant in his personality during the panic over the beast sighting on the mountain. Trying to get Ralph impeached, he uses his rhetorical skills to twist Ralph's word's. In defense, he offers to the group a rationale that " He'd never have got us meat", asserting that hunting skills make for an effective leader. Jack assigns a high value only to those who he finds useful or agreeable to his views and looks to slice those who do not please him. Denouncing the rules of order, Jack declares, " We don't need the conch anymore. We know who ought to say things". He dictates to his hunters that they forget the beast and that they stop having nightmares. The conflict on the island begins with Jack attempting to dominate the group rather than working with Ralph to benefit it. He frequently impugns the power of the conch, declaring that the conch rule does not matter on certain parts of the island. Yet he uses the conch to his advantage when possible, such as when he calls his own assembly to impeach Ralph. For him, the conch represents the rules and boundaries that have kept him from acting on the impulses to dominate others. Their entire lives in the other world, the boys had been moderated by rules set by society against physical aggression. On the island, however, that social conditioning fades rapidly from Jack's character. He quickly loses interest in that world of politeness and boundaries, which is why he feels no compunction to keep the fire going or attend to any of the other responsibilities for the betterment or survival of the group). ( WILL MARK BRAINLIEST TO WHOEVER CAN HELP ME).