Please change this to my teacher's requests. La semana pasada hice un viaje con 3 de mis amigos. Mi madre conducía su coche rojo. Fuimos a un parque y corrimos en la hierba. Mis amigos querían jugar un juego de etiqueta. Nos tomó 10 minutos para llegar allí, pero se sentía mucho más tiempo en el viaje de regreso a mi casa. Include conmigo to show who traveled with you
Include a regular imperfect tense verb to describe what you did the day of the trip
Include hace + time frame + que + verb to say how long ago you traveled
Include a -car, -gar, or -zar verb in the preterite or imperfect tense to describe how you planned or prepared for this trip

Dear Student,

You are missing the above criteria. You did not use the correct sentence structure for this article. Remember you need to use a specific time frame, not a phrase. "Last week" does not work, it needs to be "3 days ago" "1 month ago" "4 years ago" etc. with a specific number for your time frame.

Miss K