You will revise one body paragraph from your compare and contrast article. You will submit the original paragraph, the revised paragraph, and a short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing. Review your informational article. Choose one body paragraph to revise and copy this paragraph into a new document.
Review your paragraph and make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.
Write one short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing.

The original draft of your body paragraph
The revised draft of the same paragraph
A short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing

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hese two groups of kids who helped thier community are different because. In the first stages of the mintues that matter program they found a recycler from michigan, that would pay them five dollars for each phone they sent in to be recycled. Which they would be able to buy prepaid mintues so that the soliders would be able to call their families without paying a fee.
In Food that Fuels when Cassandra and her friends finally found out how to make fuel out of fries. They asked the town hall to set up a container for where restraunts could put left over cooking oil.