Add adjectives and adverbs. Mark your new additions with an (Adj) or (Adv). Make other revisions suggested in your Discussion-Based Assessment.
Write a reflection paragraph discussing changes you made during the revision process. Explain how you feel these changes improved your narrative

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This story is about Two teens who live in New York City and find a buried time capsule with scratched-out words. The only words they could make out wore "He will prevail”. Intrigued they dragged the heavy cylinder into a hidden alleyway and opened it and wen they saw. What was inside they looked at each other with hope in their eyes. That was the first time in years they had hope in their eyes.

Just start by writing things that your can reword or rearrange the sentences.

So what I changed was is about my narrative story

OR

My reflection paragraph is just discussing the changes that I made or wrote about in my narrative story

Explanation:

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the minoan civilization flourished in the middle bronze age on the island of crete located in the eastern mediterranean from c. 2000 bce until c. 1500 bce. with their unique art and architecture, and the spread of their ideas through contact with other cultures across the aegean, the minoans made a significant contribution to the development of western european civilization as it is known today. labyrinth-like palace complexes, vivid frescoes depicting scenes such as bull-leaping and processions, fine gold jewelry, elegant stone vases, and pottery with vibrant decorations of marine life are all particular features of minoan crete.  

so basically their unique way of ding arts, as well as architecture.