A. s.a. p! i also need a catchy introduction for it! me paraphrase this ( try to add new ideas)! everyone should live in california! there is an abundance of land that comes at a cheap price, and you can become rich from our gold! you should come by covered wagon, bringing food, water, blankets, pots, silverware, and tools. we also have a trail that you can take called the oregon trail! your life could be an adventure in a new place where anything is possible. it will not be easy since our settlement is new, but with the resources we have, we can make california a great place! there are many people already living here, so much of your work is already done for you! we have a railroad being built by chinese immigrants and you can also meet native americans! however, some possible dangers on your journey and in the new land would be starvation, sickness, and bankruptcy. though there are many dangers, there are many positive aspects of moving to california. you can live on the coast, near a nice beach and you could get lucky and make money off of gold! i think you will love it here, so come join us in california!