During the revision phase for an argumentative essay, a writer should

One possible answer for this: Check for style and tone.

Taking an assessment of the style and tone of your essay is part of the revision process.  There are other items that are part of the preparation process or writing process.  

For instance, in the research phase, you are searching for facts and evidence that will go into your essay.  

In the planning phase, you will establish a thesis and outline of your argument.  

Then in the writing phase, you will put that clear argument into writing.  Once you have written your overall argument, then you would seek to write a strong conclusion to the essay (still in the writing phase).  

Matters such as proofreading, checking the accuracy of your citations and bibliography list, and checking your style and tone -- those are parts of the revision phase of your essay work.

One possible answer for this: Check for style and tone.

Taking an assessment of the style and tone of your essay is part of the revision process.  There are other items that are part of the preparation process or writing process.  

For instance, in the research phase, you are searching for facts and evidence that will go into your essay.  

In the planning phase, you will establish a thesis and outline of your argument.  

Then in the writing phase, you will put that clear argument into writing.  Once you have written your overall argument, then you would seek to write a strong conclusion to the essay (still in the writing phase).  

Matters such as proofreading, checking the accuracy of your citations and bibliography list, and checking your style and tone -- those are parts of the revision phase of your essay work.

it was certainly a debatable decision, mainly because it was based primarily on political - and not on legal or social - views. since the congress at that time was led by members of the republican party, and the territory that the tribes wanted to turn into an exclusively indian state was predominantly democratic, the proposal (as expressed in the constitution) did not succeed, but the constitution itself proved to be of crucial importance in the creation of the state of oklahoma, and, most importantly, it guaranteed the involvement of representatives of the indian tribes in the government of the future joint state.  

as a member of congress, i would have voted to ratify the constitution, or at least to have it tabled. ignoring it was an interested and partial decision.