Can someone help me write the hook

Passage: Sweet and difficult sounds.

essential question: Why do failure and struggle make success more meaningful?

So we typically think that struggle is hard and thought but hear me out. Without struggle it would not be as satisfying when we achieve things. Because we are shown that all the pain, the sacrifices we’ve made, and all are decisions were worth it. Mostly because it allows you to see where you came from and where you are now. But one question I want you to ask is how sounds can effect this your drive to success and that’s what I’m here to talk about.

Idk if that was good but I tried so hope it works out bud