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George Washington was America’s first and greatest president. He was born in 1732. His experience as an army officer helped him avoid wars during his presidency. He stopped the Whiskey Rebellion from becoming a war and Pennsylvania. He kept us out of war in France. Washington‘s greatest example was retiring after only two times.
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