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Which sentence should be revised to reduce wordiness? a. the speech that the computer science expert gave about online data mining was informative and entertaining. b. the speech that the computer science expert gave regarding online data mining was filled with information and was also very entertaining. c. the expert in computer science gave an informative and entertaining speech about online data mining. d. the speech about online data mining was entertaining and informative.

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The correct answer is B) The speech that the computer science expert gave regarding online data mining was filled with information and was also very entertaining.

The sentence that should be revised to reduce wordiness is "The speech that the computer science expert gave regarding online data mining was filled with information and was also very entertaining."

In writing, the author must learn to go to the point. The idea must be clear, direct, and specific for a better understanding of the reader. After writing the text, you should check for grammar mistakes as well as spelling mistakes. But also you have to reduce wordiness, words or phrases that are redundant and has no need to be there in your sentence. If a word does not have any real meaning in the text, drop it.

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the topic i chose to write about was " why scuba diving is so popular". the topic is suitable for the audience because it is the easiest to develop and explain, it can be explained in a simpler more conversational manner, it does not require the use of too many technical words, and the final reason for selecting this topic is that it is the one most people can relate to, you might not know too much about scuba diving, but you could probably agree that it is very popular. the purpose of the writing about this topic is to convince more people about the benefits both for the body and the mind that scuba diving can have on a person. it can you keep fit since it requires a lot of energy when swimming underwater; it also you relax because you forget about the world when you are underwater being mesmerized by the underwater world. i would write this paper in the summer, a perfect time to give scuba diving a try if a person has not done it yet.

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imma have to go the third option

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