How does the author’s choice of words affect the reader’s view of outer space? steadily, inevitably came a brilliant line, came a thin edge of intolerable effulgence that took a circular shape, became a bow, became a blazing sceptre, and hurled a shaft of heat at us as though it was a spear. the negative connotation of the words in the passage signals the danger that the characters face. the positive connotation of the words in the passage causes the reader to view the moon with awe. the positive connotation of the words in the passage implies that the men will experience an adventure on the moon. the author uses a pattern of jumbled thoughts to express the confusion mr. bedford feels as he observes the sun.

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to eliminate ambiguous remote or broad reference it is necessary to focus on anaphoric reference. by definition "anaphoric reference means that a word in a text refers back to other ideas in the text for its meaning." the references should be clear and leave no room for ambiguity.

in the first case the pronoun it probably refers to the car but it has not been mentioned before so we should replace it for the car. in doing so the statement becomes clear.

in sentence number   two   the pronoun he refers to charles dickens the author. yet, the first half of the sentence is about the book a tale of two cities. to repair this it would be better to rephrase the first half : after i read   a tale of two cities by dickens, he so as to remove the remote reference.