The are 12 mistakes in laura`s essay . correct them
most egyptian children went to school when he were eight .there were sports for boys only, which was not much funny for girls. egyptians liked a music and most childrens learned to play a instrument. egyptian houses did not has as many furniture as our houses. the furniture was usually made of wood, but rich peoples decorate their furniture with gold and ivory. egyptians got a milk and meat from goats and they eat a lot of fish. they sweetened his food with honey

  plan: i will begin with a quotation about the importance of unity in a community. then, i will state my claim that an activity will unite our school by creating a shared vision, purpose, and direction. in the body, i will use three main points that describe the different avenues the students can take: through a variety of clubs, through a special event, or through an awareness week. i will provide evidence about other towns that have unity activities and the kinds of events that they include. pictures will illustrate my three main points in action. for the ending, i will restate the main idea in a new way and pose a question to keep the audience thinking.