How to revise a fictional narrative

You should get some feedback, 
Check with another person for errors,
and finalize your work!

hope this helped

Ask yourself these essential questions:

What is the purpose?
What makes clear and effective writing?
What will work best for the audience?
Who is the audience?
Why do writers write?
Why do writers write? What is the purpose?
What makes clear and effective writing?
Who is the audience? What will work best for the audience?
How do grammar and the conventions of language influence spoken and written communication?

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