Ill mark ! jake was tired of homework and was watching his neighbor's cat chase a butterfly instead. what is the best way to revise this sentence to create an active, vivid picture for the reader? jake was fed up with homework, so he was entertained by his neighbor's cat chasing a butterfly. bored with homework, jake chuckled at the entertaining sight of his neighbor's cat chasing a butterfly. bored with having to do homework, jake took a break and was watching his neighbor's cat. as the neighbor's cat chased a butterfly, jake became bored with doing his homework.