1. during the revising stage, it is important to review an essay's thesis statement to make sure it is strong. which of the following is the strongest thesis statement for an essay on personal finance? a. most students want financial security. b. i think financial security might be one of the most important objectives for any student. c. if a student is too immature to get his finances straight, he should be banned from ever taking out any loans or opening up any credit cards. d. in order to achieve financial security, students should prioritize their goals by following several important steps. 2. read the thesis statement below from an essay on personal finance. then, choose which of the sentences below would not make a good topic sentence for a body paragraph in the essay. in order to achieve financial security, students should prioritize their goals by following several important steps. a. set goals effectively by focusing on the big picture. b. the first step is to make a list of goals. c. be sure to shop around for the lowest loan rates. d. if other family members will be affected by the financial plan, their input should be included when setting goals. 3. read the introductory paragraph below from an essay on personal finance. the thesis statement is underlined. based on this introduction, and especially the thesis statement, what is the most likely purpose of the essay? ever since the economic recession started in 2008, an effort has been made to educate students about personal finance. high schools and colleges are offering more personal finance classes than ever before. one of the most basic lessons from these courses is that students need to take responsibility for their own finances if they are to be successful. in order to achieve financial security, students should prioritize their goals by following several important steps. a. to explain a process b. to define a term c. to argue in favor of a point of view d. to amuse or entertain the audience