Awriting about my first day of scool

if you are ever asked to write about anything for an academic assignment, chances are you’ve been asked to write an essay.  what does this mean?   well, this means that your writing should be a minimum of five paragraphs—one introduction, three body paragraphs, and one conclusion. this also means that your introduction will contain a thesis statement.  to review, a thesis statement is basically a list that mentions the topics of the body paragraphs in the order they will be presented.  thus, an essay about your first day of school should contain three things about which you will write.  for your first day of school, you’ll more than likely want to write about three events that happened on that day.  your thesis statement would end up looking something like this:   “i enjoyed my first day of school because on my first day of school, i experienced event a, event b, and event c.”  remember, of course, that your second paragraph would discuss only event a.  your third paragraph would discuss only event b.  your fourth paragraph would discuss event c.  and, your fifth paragraph would wrap things up by taking into account all events as you conclude and provide some final thoughts on the day overall and reaffirmation of your liking (or disliking) of the day. thus, thinking back on your first day of school, i recommend thinking of three things that happened, determining whether or not they led you to liking your first day,  and  going from there.   

just took the test;

argument: "it's time to wage a war against britain to secure american freedom."

claims: "america has tried every peaceful method available for seperating from england" & "the americans' petitions to the king have been turned away by him."