Read the conclusion to a personal statement. (1) i’ve had some growth experiences. (2) they’ve me to improve my math skills. (3) moreover, i have learned to apply these skills to designing and constructing movie sets. (4) i’m looking forward to honing my skills by working as a production assistant on a film this summer. the best way to improve the conclusion is to revise sentence 1 to restate a specific topic. add details about a future goal to sentence 2. delete sentence 3 because it is repetitive. specify the name of the film in sentence 4.

Read the passage. (1) the first skateboard was constructed of old roller-skate wheels attached to a piece of wood. (2) improvements were made to the skateboard in 1959. (3) the year that the first commercially made skateboard appeared. (4) soon after, skateboarding began to grow in popularity. (5) in 1963, skateboard manufacturers formed the first professional skateboarding team. (6) that same year, the first organized skateboard competition took place, in california. which is the most effective way to correct the fragment in sentence 3? attach the fragment to sentence 4. attach the fragment to sentence 2. insert the phrase in the united states to the end of the fragment. insert the verb had before the verb appeared.