This is a part in my biography that i am writing and i would like to know if the punctuation is correct. "he had taught thomas howard, 4th duke of norfolk when he was a child, and remained a lifelong beneficiary of norfolk's sponsorship." someone told me it should be like this "he had taught thomas howard, 4th duke of norfolk, when he was a child and remained a lifelong beneficiary of norfolk's sponsorship." which one is more accurate?

Read the following passage: sari couldn't believe her bad luck. she had locked her keys in the car. to add fuel to the fire, her cell phone was in the locked car, and she was late for a very important meeting. she knocked on her neighbor's door so that she could ask to use his phone, but he was not not home. what was she to do? what role does the idiom in the passage serve? a. it shows that sari has incredibly bad luck when it comes to work.b. it shows that sari's neighbor was not home either.c. it shows that sari locked her keys in the car.d. it shows that sari's situation was worse than it seemed at first.

Which traits are strongest in your persuasive essay: ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, or conventions?

In this example, what does the author use to describe laurie