Which of these excerpts correctly uses the chronological approach in a personal narrative? a. upset, zachary stormed off to his room, turned his stereo up full blast, and lay on his bed trying to tune out his sister's peals of laughter. b. the mother, speaking in a low voice, told the girl she was being rude and asked if they couldn't just spend a nice afternoon together for once. c. at the beginning of the race jenna felt exhilarated, but then she found it hard to focus, and by the fifth mile she just wanted it to be over. d. he stared at his computer for more than an hour without producing even one idea. earlier in the day he had gone for a walk hoping some fresh air would jog something in his brain.

(1) one of the most popular festivals in southeast asia is diwali, the hindu festival of lights. (2) diwali means “row of lights.” (3) several legends claim that the festival was created to celebrate the homecoming of lord rama after more than 14 years of exile. (4) after lord rama defeated the demon ravana, the people placed small lanterns outside of their houses to light their leader’s way home. (5) today, the festival honors many different gods and traditions. (6) most people view diwali as a celebration of hope and a time to remember that good will always overcome evil. (7) people celebrate the five-day festival with an abundance of lights, fireworks, food, and music. (8) many families also pay their respects to different gods by building small altars in their homes. jordan has decided that moving sentence 4 before sentence 3 will improve the organization of the report. is jordan correct in her revision? a) yes, because the revision explains why rama was exiled b) no, the revision disrupts the logical order of the report c) no, the revision moves the answer away from the posed question eliminate d) yes, the revision improves the chronological order of the report