When revising a narrative essay, the writer should include conflictdialoguepoint of viewsensory language that allows the reader to see, smell, hear, feel, and taste what is going on in the story.

Sensory Language. You're Welcome

“asleep in his bed” is personified.

b. and i with my fighting heart, i thought at

first / to steal up to him [the cyclops].   the cyclops’ actions first odysseus to take

action after killing his men and trapping in the cave revealed his intent of

doing them harm.   that is why odysseus

blinded him to enable him and his men to escape.