Read the following paragraph. obviously, we all know about american football and baseball. however, there are other sports that most americans never think about, let alone participate in. soccer is played all over the world. it is loved by hundreds of millions of people across all continents. cricket is also quite popular. it is played in countries like england but also in pakistan and india. it is the second most popular sport in the world. the third most popular sport in the world is field hockey. it is played by both male and female athletes in many places. which revision would make this paragraph suitable for a presentation? which revision would make this paragraph suitable for a presentation? inserting stronger verbs and a more active voicemaking sentences longer and more meaningfulincluding personal and second-person pronounsrevising the text with more formal language

“dylan was a revolutionary,” bruce springsteen said in his 1988 speech inducting dylan into the rock and roll hall of fame. “the way that elvis freed your body, bob freed your mind.” early masterpieces such as “a hard rain’s a-gonna fall” and “visions of johanna” and “like a rolling stone” fueled a debate: are rock lyrics poetry? the answer must be yes, because on thursday, dylan was awarded the highest honor for a writer: the nobel prize in literature. the swedish academy, in making him the first american winner since novelist toni morrison in 1993, cited him for “having created new poetic expressions within the great american song tradition.” –“dylan's nobel prize settles debate: rock lyrics are poetry,” dan deluca what is the best summary of the author’s claim? rock lyrics can be like poetry. bob dylan was a revolutionary. musicians deserve nobel prizes. more americans deserve nobel prizes.