In “the outcasts of poker flat,” what important plot development is brought on by uncle billy’s stealing of the mules?

Which sentence most needs to be revised because its description is too vague?

different strategies reach different people based on their ability to understand the material. (from personal experience) when writing an argumentative essay write explaining the subject as though your audience never heard of it before and it is just being introduced, then explain why other people hate it also, afterward you would explain why that would be wrong. i hope that : )

she is outspoken and direct