Sascha needs to turn her draft in to her teacher, but she's worried because her introduction paragraph is only one sentence long. it's the thesis statement. what advice can you give her

Some brief advice that I could offer Sascha is that she could include the three components of a thesis statement for her introductory paragraph. A hook, short summary of what her essay will talk about, and a comment about her position in relation to the topic.  Hope that helps.

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