Michael is giving his friend feedback on her paper. which sections of his review contain constructive feedback?
my favorite part of the essay was when you described your grandmother's reaction after finding the frog in her purse because it was so funny and so vivid. however, i thought that the section with the pie-eating contest wasn’t very interesting. it just made me want to stop reading the essay.

i would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same words many times in the essay. use a thesaurus to find synonyms if you need to. you should change is the ending. i didn't understand it at all. what was your grandmother doing with that blanket? i don't usually like essays with lame endings like this one.

1. select a book or movie that has at least one sequel. write a persuasive paragraph discussing which version you believe is better the original book or movie or the sequel. if there is more than one sequel to the original book or movie, select only one of the sequels on which to foous be sure to clearly introduce your argument use at least one ype of thetoric to persuade your reader, incilude specific details from the book or movie and address at least one counterclaim.

Andy bernard laughed at my joke, spitting out his water. complete thought incomplete thought

Match each excerpt to the correct stanza structure. 1. it was many and many a year ago, in a kingdom by the sea, that a maiden there lived whom you may know by the name of annabel lee; and this maiden she lived with no other thought than to love and be loved by me. (from "annabel lee" by edgar allan poe) 2. o thou, new-year, delaying long, delayest the sorrow in my blood, that longs to burst a frozen bud and flood a fresher throat with song. (from "in memoriam" by alfred lord tennyson) 3. nature’s first green is gold, her hardest hue to hold. her early leaf’s a flower but only so an hour. then leaf subsides to leaf. so eden sank to grief,; so dawn goes down to day. nothing gold can stay. (from "nothing gold can stay" by robert frost) 4. at sestos hero dwelt; hero the fair, whom young apollo courted for her hair, and offered as a dower his burning throne, where she should sit for men to gaze upon. the outside of her garments were of lawn, the lining purple silk, with gilt stars drawn; (from "hero and leander" by christopher marlowe) quatrain couplet octave sestet