Somebody please help me with this paragraph about how it's Bruce Ismay's fult for the Titanics sinking. Here is what I have so far Counterclaim: Some people may argue that Captain Edward Smith was more responsible because he had also manned the Olympic when a US Navy Vessel accidently hit her, the Olympic did in fact survive. However, this could make Captain Smith over confident when he was steering the Titanic.

Rebbutal: So, who cares if the captain was a little cocky, Bruce Ismay still pressed Captain Smith into going at top speed. Plus, Bruce Ismay had more power than Captain Smith, what Bruce says goes.
Call to action: Clearly Bruce Ismay, is the ‘man’ that should be held more responsible for the Titanic’s sinking.