To edit the paragraph, the writer should put a comma between hot and dry because they are coordinate adjectives. The word august should be capitalized, but summer and north should not. finally, the writer should use a serial comma in the list and set off which i love with a pair of commas to avoid confusing readers. Review the sample response. which changes did you suggest in your response? i. The coordinate adjectives hot and dry should be separated by a comma.
ii. August should be capitalized. summer and north should not be capitalized.
iii. There should be a serial comma in the list.
iv. A pair of commas should separate the phrase which i love from the rest of the sentence.

Read the excerpt from "politics and the english language" by george orwell. by this morning’s post i have received a pamphlet dealing with conditions in germany. the author tells me that he "felt impelled” to write it. i open it at random, and here is almost the first sentence that i see: "[the allies] have an opportunity not only of achieving a radical transformation of germany’s social and political structure in such a way as to avoid a nationalistic reaction in germany itself, but at the same time of laying the foundations of a cooperative and unified europe.” which statement is correct? orwell uses an example and statistical evidence in this excerpt. orwell uses an example and a quotation for evidence in this excerpt. orwell uses hypothetical and factual evidence in this excerpt. orwell uses hypothetical and statistical evidence in this excerpt.