Which revision would best improve the connections between ideas and the flow of the paragraph? adding a fact to improve the logic of sentence 2 moving sentence 3 to the end of the paragraph adding a transitional phrase to sentence 4 using an analogy to describe a restaurant in sentence 5.

cause they were to dumb to get their college education to become a real   : )

you did not put the article. so i cannot answer the question.

although there are different versions for the fairy tale little red riding hood,   as the one from grimm brothers and perrault, all of the versions show the huntsman as a man who is in perfect harmony with nature. the statement that best describe him, the huntsman, is that he is a true hero who inspires those around him due to his words and actions. the way he acts show internal reflections that are an example to follow by anybody who takes the time to analysing them. he shows altruism actions when he aside puts his job just to check the grandmother is well, by doing this he could notice at an early stage what has happened and could save her.

i think its a waste but, it also important for are education