I need your feedback on my poem depression
every since my friend left
It has been like a rock
on my back holding me down
until I can't move any more
It's like stepping into a dark and terrifying alley with no idea what awaits you.
it's like you in the middle of the ocean, and there is no land in sight
it's like being punched in the middle of the day randomly
not knowing when the next hit will come
but in the end, they all say the same thing
THEY SAY THAT HOPE IS HAPPINESS.
that's hope is An eternal flame
but that never helps
depression is a Shadow
following you everywhere you go
you cant rid of it
only when your turn on the light
it hides waiting for the next time that your lights turn off
depression is like being Trapped on a Desert Island
The heat keeps burning; I need water. One drop of water is the hope
I have been waiting the drop never came
instead, the ocean came
The ocean is a mighty beast
ok yes thanks for asking I am ok

4. interpret how do the speaker's descriptions of and feelings about the wind change as the poem progresses? how does this shift show a change in the tone of the poem?

Select the correct answer. read this excerpt from leo tolstoy's the death of ivan ilyich: her attitude towards him and his diseases is still the same. just as the doctor had adopted a certain relation to his patient which he could not abandon, so had she formed one towards him—that he was not doing something he ought to do and was himself to blame, and that she reproached him lovingly for this—and she could not now change that attitude. "you see he doesn't listen to me and doesn't take his medicine at the proper time. and above all he lies in a position that is no doubt bad for him—with his legs up." she described how he made gerasim hold his legs up. the doctor smiled with a contemptuous affability that said: "what's to be done? these sick people do have foolish fancies of that kind, but we must forgive them. . " they all rose, said good-night, and went away. when they had gone it seemed to ivan ilyich that he felt better; the falsity had gone with them. but the pain remained—that same pain and that same fear that made everything monotonously alike, nothing harder and nothing easier. everything was worse. again minute followed minute and hour followed hour. everything remained the same and there was no cessation. and the inevitable end of it all became more and more terrible. based on the excerpt, how is praskovya fedorovna a character foil to ivan ilyich? a. she is kind and takes care of ivan, which is why he feels guilty about how he treated her for most of their married life. b. she is vindictive toward ivan while pretending to be worried about him, thus reminding him of how his family has never forgiven him. c. she plays the part of the worried wife without any real feeling, symbolizing the false propriety ivan upheld but now hates. d. she is young, healthy, and beautiful—everything ivan can never be again and wishes he could return to. reset next

Which of the following does not apply to an informative text? select all that apply. persuasive techniques supporting evidence opinions narrative text