I NEED HELP. i dont know how to write my conclusion for my paragraph, and can yall revise and edit it for me?? Everyone has a competitive spirit inside them. That spirit motivates us to achieve our goals, but it is not necessary for success in life. Competition can set us back instead of moving us forward, which is why competition is

For someone to be successful, it's more about how exposed you are instead of how well you compete against others. For example, Starbucks is one of the most popular coffee chains because of how much clout and reviews they get on the internet. When someone sees good reviews about something, that person puts their trust in those individuals and they get into the mindset that the product is great and they go out to get it.

Competition can be destructive to children's self-esteem, it interferes with learning, sabotages relationships, and isn't necessary to have a good time. In a competitive culture, a child is told that it isn’t enough to be good, but that they must triumph over others. Success is normally defined as a victory, even though these are two very different things. Even when the child manages to win, the whole affair, psychologically speaking, becomes a vicious circle: The more he competes, the more he needs to compete to feel good about himself.