Write a single scene that uses rich description to build suspense. Your scene should include a character who is tempted to act impulsively. This writing assignment focuses on the following skills:

Using language to convey a vivid picture to the reader
Using imagery to create and develop suspense
Using description to convey a particular feeling
You should have completed a draft of this assignment in the activity before this one. If you haven't done so, go back and complete that activity now.

Ask yourself these questions as you revise:

Did I use vivid imagery that connects to the senses?
Did I use details to create suspense?
Did I consider building tension by sharing the character's thoughts or worries?
Did I consider building tension by using dramatic irony?
Did I write a single scene, not a whole story?
Did I write up to the moment of highest tension (the climax) and stop there?