Find descritive words "I watched a thunderstorm, far out over the sea. It began quietly,
and with nothing visible except tall dark douds and å rolling tide.
There was just a soft murmur of thunder as I watched the horizon
from my balcony. Over the next few minutes, the clouds closed and
reflected lightning set the rippling ocean aglow. The thunderheads
had covered up the sun, shadowing the vista. It was peaceful for a
long time
I was looking up when the first dear thunderbolt struck. It blazed
against the dy and sea I could see its shape in portest reverse colors
when i blinked More followed. The thunder rumbled and stuttered
as if it could hardly keep up. There were openings in the doud now,
as if the sky were form, and spots of brilliant blue shone above the
shadowed sea
I looked down then, welching the waves Every bolt was answered
by a moment of spreading Hout on the sure The verre
tan erough rising high and crashing hard enough that I could
GF DER

the positive connotations of the words "pretty," "quiet," and "silence" give the excerpt a tone of nervousness. i think its this

(i'm bad at sudden poems so don't yell at me i'm trying to represent sadness or something like that but its real hard)

at the age of 4, she thought everything was better.

she was innocent, she was joyful, despite the predictions about the bad weather.

at the age of 10, she started to figure things out.

in life, in its meaning, she started to doubt.

at the age of 14, she was filled with depression, anxiety and fear,

that nobody cared about her, and death was drawing near.

at the age of 17, her sleeves got longer, her will got shorter, until she couldn't take it anymore.

she left this earth with a rope, chair and to the heavens she would soar.

awnser:

one thing blogging and good copywriting share is a conversational style, and that means it’s fine to fracture the occasional rule of proper grammar in order to communicate effectively. both bloggers and copywriters routinely end sentences with prepositions, dangle a modifier in a purely technical sense, or make liberal use of the ellipsis when an em dash is the correct choice-all in order to write in the way people actually speak. but there are other mistakes that can detract from your credibility. while we all hope what we have to say is more important than some silly grammatical error, the truth is some people will not subscribe or link to your blog if you make dumb mistakes when you write, and buying from you will be out of the question.