Can someone revise this paragraph' '' In minutes that matter and food that fuels the protagonists are both helpers that made a difference in the world with their thinking skills. The groups also took their activity time to help people with heating homes and donating phones. The difference between the 2 hero groups is one group worked to heat up homes with leftover oil. The other group also worked very hard to donate over 180 million minutes to soldiers! ''

then write another one on how your revision improved you last paragraph (25 points and brainliest to best answer)

It was a bitter cold saturday morning ,the young track star dressed for his daily five mile run

Sure, i wish things had turned out differently for me in vietnam. but i know things could have turned out worse, too. so ljust try to be for what i do have and do my best to be independent. i can dress myself and even tie a tie. no more playing guitar, though. if i close my eyes, i can just about hear the music. just strumming my heartstrings is what i'm doing, i suppose. how could the author best resolve this situation to create a feeling of somber regret? a. the narrator describes the difficulty in cooking for himself. b. the narrator decides to sell his guitar and take up a new instrument. c. the narrator points out that he doesn't have to wear a tie too often. d.the narrator mentions a friend who did not live through the war.

Which sentence is an example of an i-statement? a) this is by far the worst report you have ever submitted b) your report has so many mistakes that we can’t use it c) i am unhappy to learn that you overlooked crucial details in the report. we just lost a potential client d) i guess the person who wrote this repost didn’t understand the consequences of submitting poor quality work