Somebody proof read this "There was a girl named May, Her family always told her not to join the military because it was against their beliefs and her dad's father had a father who passed away in the military. but mat ignored them."

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You have to change the last sentence, it can’t start with but. Also add better words and look at the grammar. You can also add more details

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after following, but not really , the young hunter on his search for the heron, sylvia slips out of bed alone in the middle of the night to find the heron for herself. perched at the top of a gigantic pine tree, sylvia spots the heron, and its nest, in a dead hemlock tree across the way. the following morning she returns home to find her grandmother and the hunter waiting for her at the door. in the moment when she plans to tell the hunter where to find the heron, she suddenly decides to protect the heron and remain silent; even the promise of much needed money does not sway her.

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being buried alive

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