Too many sentence fragments in your writing might: make your readers think that you can't write well
make readers wonder what's happening
confuse your reader with too many incomplete thoughts
any of the above
Its number 3

its passive

active

passive

active

it wouldnt be considered cheating as long as you dont copy the answered we give here word from word.

also remember that some online schools have things that can tell if you have copy and pasted anything into your report.